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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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My mother, Brandi, is his grandchild yet he took her in when she was born up until she was 8 and continued to be the main parental figure in her life up until the day he died.
  

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My mother Brandi is actually his granddaughter. He took her in when she was born and raised her like a father until she was 8. And he continued to be a father figure to her until his death.

  • My mother Brandi is actually his granddaughter.
  • He took her in when she was born and raised her like a father until she was 8.
  • And he continued to be a father figure to her until his death.
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My mother Brandi is actually his granddaughter. He took her in when she was born and raised her like a father until she was 8. And he continued to be a father figure to her until his death.

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