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Bbser Posted 16 years ago
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During her years of training in math, she kept seeking the sense of success by trying to conquer hard math problems one after another. Such endeavors sharpened her thinking and helped her develop flexible strategies as needed to solve not just math problems but also those from reality.
  

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During her years of training in mathematics , she kept seeking the sense of success in the solution of difficult algebraic and trigonometric problems. This sharpened her thinking and helped her develop flexible strategies to solve not just math problems but also those from reality.

  • During her years of training in mathematics , she kept seeking the sense of success in the solution of difficult algebraic and trigonometric problems.
  • This sharpened her thinking and helped her develop flexible strategies to solve not just math problems but also those from reality.
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During her years of training in mathematics, she kept seeking the sense of success in the solution of difficult algebraic and trigonometric problems. This sharpened her thinking and helped her develop flexible strategies to solve not just math problems but also those from reality.

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