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Ant_222 Posted 19 years ago
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Help translate a title #2

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00Could you please have a look at how I have translated another sci-paper title and correct it?02br
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00«Extending AT-TECHNOLOGY complex’s tools for the support of construction of real-time integrated expert systems»02br
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00Thanks in advance,02br
00Anton 0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Could you please have a look at how I have translated another sci-paper title and correct it? 02br 02br 00«Extending AT-TECHNOLOGY complex’s tools for the support of construction of real-time integrated expert systems» 02font 02br 02br 00Perhaps your intended audience will undertstand your title, but as a layman I think you have too many prepositions. How about this?

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00Could you please have a look at how I have translated another sci-paper title and correct it?
  • 02br 02br 00«Extending AT-TECHNOLOGY complex’s tools for the support of construction of real-time integrated expert systems» 02font 02br 02br 00Perhaps your intended audience will undertstand your title, but as a layman I think you have too many prepositions.
  • How about this?
  • -02br 02br 01font 00«Extending AT-TECHNOLOGY 01i 01font 00complex’s tools02font 00 02i 00for the support of real-time integrated expert-systems construction» 02font 02br 02br 01font 00I don't know what00 .
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0Hi,02br
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01font00Could you please have a look at how I have translated another sci-paper title and correct it? 02br
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00«Extending AT-TECHNOLOGY complex’s tools for the support of construction of real-time integrated expert systems» 02font02br
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00Perhaps your intended audience will undert
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0 Thank you, CJ.02br
00I mean the tools of the complex, only part of them. Not the whole complex. 0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00Extending AT-TECHNOLOGY complex’s tools 02font02br
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00'Complex' does not really seem like a suitable word here. Can you just say this? -02br
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01font00Extending AT-TECHNOLOGY's tools 00or perhaps00 02font02br
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0 Sorry for CJ, I was a bit drunk...02br
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00Well, in Russian it's called a complex too, so I though I could keep this word in English. 0-
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