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Mitar Posted 11 years ago
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Dear All,
Our company has a update policy that we consider our customer, social, goods product, employees, etc. We need to send the policy to you for understanding and supporting.
  

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Mitar Dear All,Our company has a update policy that we consider our customer, social, goods product, employees, etc. We need to send the policy to you for understanding and supporting. Hi Mitar, I do not understand your sentence fully; I am sure someone else will.

  • Mitar Dear All,Our company has a update policy that we consider our customer, social, goods product, employees, etc.
  • We need to send the policy to you for understanding and supporting.
  • Hi Mitar, I do not understand your sentence fully; I am sure someone else will.
  • But we: introduce a policy adopt a policy pursue a policy follow a policy update a policy (if it exists already) Perhaps you need something like this: Dear All, Our company has updated its policy on ....
  • We are sending the terms of the policy...
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Mitar Dear All,Our company has a update policy that we consider our customer, social, goods product, employees, etc. We need to send the policy to you for understanding and supporting.
Hi Mitar,

I do not understand your sentence fully; I am sure someone else will.

But we:

introduce a policy
adopt a policy
purs

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