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Verumm Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Help to correct, please
1) "This town has many beautiful places and is of historical significance".
2) "It'll be a pleasure to HAVE you in our company".
I have some ideas. First of all, we should divide the 1st sent. into two parts. "This town has many beautiful places. It has historical significance". But am I right using "historical significance" this way? Are there any other options? Is there a possible sentence if we won't divide the original one?
Does it sound right when we use "have" in the second sentence? Will it be better to say "see"? Or may be "It'll be a pleasure if you are in our company".
Thanks in advance!!
2) "It'll be a pleasure to HAVE you in our company".
I have some ideas. First of all, we should divide the 1st sent. into two parts. "This town has many beautiful places. It has historical significance". But am I right using "historical significance" this way? Are there any other options? Is there a possible sentence if we won't divide the original one?
Does it sound right when we use "have" in the second sentence? Will it be better to say "see"? Or may be "It'll be a pleasure if you are in our company".
Thanks in advance!!
Top answer
(1) is grammatically correct, and there is no need to split it into two sentences. However, "has many beautiful places" seems a slightly odd thing to say of a town. , depending on exactly what is beautiful.
- (1) is grammatically correct, and there is no need to split it into two sentences.
- However, "has many beautiful places" seems a slightly odd thing to say of a town.
- , depending on exactly what is beautiful.
- (2) is OK as written.
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(1) is grammatically correct, and there is no need to split it into two sentences. However, "has many beautiful places" seems a slightly odd thing to say of a town. I would try to say it another way, such as "beautiful buildings", "beautiful sights", etc., depending on exactly what is beautiful.
(2) is OK as written.
(2) is OK as written.
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