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Today I have translated text from Polish to English about "Cloud technologies" and only with this paragraph i have trouble. Please help to correct.
In the cloud at the same time launched a large number of virtual servers, do not disturbing each other. And if one or more of them stop working due to any software errors or other problems, other servers it is not affecting. Currently, large computing clouds consist of thousands of servers located in data processing center (DPC). They provide resources, tens of thousands of applications that are used by millions of users simultaneously. Cloud technology is a convenient tool for businesses that are too expensive to own ERP, CRM, or other servers that require the acquisition and configuration of additional equipment.
In the cloud at the same time launched a large number of virtual servers, do not disturbing each other. And if one or more of them stop working due to any software errors or other problems, other servers it is not affecting. Currently, large computing clouds consist of thousands of servers located in data processing center (DPC). They provide resources, tens of thousands of applications that are used by millions of users simultaneously. Cloud technology is a convenient tool for businesses that are too expensive to own ERP, CRM, or other servers that require the acquisition and configuration of additional equipment.
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I have corrected this as far as I can understand what was meant. In the cloud at the same time are launched a large number of virtual servers, which do not interfere with each other. If one or more of them stop working due to any software errors or other problems, other servers are not affected .
- I have corrected this as far as I can understand what was meant.
- In the cloud at the same time are launched a large number of virtual servers, which do not interfere with each other.
- If one or more of them stop working due to any software errors or other problems, other servers are not affected .
- Currently, large computing clouds consist of thousands of servers located in a data processing center (DPC).
- They provide resources, tens of thousands of applications that are used by millions of users simultaneously.
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I have corrected this as far as I can understand what was meant.
In the cloud at the same time are launched a large number of virtual servers, which do not interfere with each other. If one or more of them stop working due to any software errors or other problems, other servers are not affected. Currently, large computing clouds consist of
In the cloud at the same time are launched a large number of virtual servers, which do not interfere with each other. If one or more of them stop working due to any software errors or other problems, other servers are not affected. Currently, large computing clouds consist of
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