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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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Help to correct my resume...
I need your help to correct this resume for enginnering internship...
Two-year postgraduate engineering student at ESIM (Ecole Supérieure d’Ingénieurs de Marseille) |
| OBJECTIVE | Engineering internship |
| WORKS | January-April 2005 | Sofresid Engineering | Fr - Lyon - 69 | ||
Quality, Health, Security and Environment responsible | Overall improvement of the quality system Folder creation for a global security certification Design of www.Sofresid-Sudest.com (2nd year internship) | ||||
| March 2004 | MB Plastique | Fr - Sennecey-les-Dijon - 21 | |||
Project chief | Machines layout in new factory Design of www.MBP-Plastics.com (1st year internship) | ||||
| August 2003 | At home | Fr - Baigneux-les-juifs - 21 | |||
Webmaster | Design of www.GitesRomenay.com | ||||
| August 2002 | SARL Mercuzot | Fr - Baigneux-les-juifs - 21 | |||
Baker | Work in a craft baking | ||||
| SKILLS | Type of skill | Level of Competence | Last use | Experience | |
English | Good | Currently used | 12 years | ||
Spanish | Intermediate | Currently used | 7 years | ||
C/HTML/Basic | Intermediate | Currently used | 3 years | ||
Photoshop / Illustrator | Good | Currently used | 3 years | ||
Microsoft Office | Good | Currently used | 4 years | ||
Dreamweaver | Good | Currently used | 3 years | ||
Inventor / PRO/Engineer | Good | Currently used | 2 years | ||
| OTHER INTERESTS | Multimedia, computer, Internet and website design. Mountain bike, handball, paint-ball, tennis, volleyball and many other sports. Referee in handball and volleyball. Reading, cinema, nature. | |
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You need the word 'Employment' instead of 'Works' and ' Quality, Health, Security and Environment responsible' makes no sense as a job title.
- You need the word 'Employment' instead of 'Works' and ' Quality, Health, Security and Environment responsible' makes no sense as a job title.
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You need the word 'Employment' instead of 'Works' and 'Quality, Health, Security and Environment responsible' makes no sense as a job title.
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