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0 Hi, I'm writing something for my business to English users, but I am not good in English, and really have no idea how my words look like, pls kindly help to correct it for me, how is the correct and better way to express it, thanks SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!02br02br00What I'm writing is:02br02br01u00COMPANY.com is new, it is a baby in the industry. But staffs at COMPANY are already highly skilled and experienced, COMPANY is ready to produce the highest level of works, and is doing its best to prove it to you. By temporarily waiving the requirement of down payment, we want you to have ZERO risk when having us achieve a high level of work. You have your high-end project go live without risk.02u0-

Lil&apos; Ruby Rose · Accepted Answer

0Company.com is new: a mere baby in the industry. The Company staff, on the other hand, are old hands - all highly skilled and experienced. Company is ready to produce the highest standard of work, and we will do our best to prove it to you. By temporarily waiving any requirement for a down-payment, we put you in a risk free position. We want you to have your high-end project go live with zero risk.02br
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00[What's the product, Anonymous? It feels a bit fluffy at the moment, without much substance]0-

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please give me advices on this motivation letter as soon as possibke

I have the honor to express my interest, and request your benevolence to kindly accept me at your University of INSA “Institut National des Sciences Appliquées de Lyon” to have a master’s degree in Nanotechnology Engineering program which consequently will give me the chance to enter the research domain and gain my PhD. I would like to inform you that I am a final year undergraduate student in a four-year program bachelor degree of physics at the Beirut Arab University.

However; due to my experimental work at CNRS (National Council for Scientific Research in Lebanon), where I am doing my senior project ending in the first of June, I found myself very curious, patient as well as a persistent person. Based on this work as well as taking a course of Nanoparticles in the previous semester, I found that the domain of applied physics is very interesting. Besides, Nanotechnology is a promising domain which progress the life of humanity by finding a variety of solutions for a wide range of problems. Indeed Nanotechnology is the production and use of materials with purposely engineered features close to the atomic or molecular scale; it deals with putting things together atom-by-atom and with structures so small they are invisible to the naked eye, providing the ability to create materials, devices and systems with fundamentally new functions and properties.

Knowing that Lebanon is a country insufficient with the appropriate experimental equipments, on the other hand the University of INSA is rich in many labs involved in nanotechnology domain such as INL (Institut des Nanotechnologies de Lyon) which is a fundamental and applied research laboratory in the field of micro- and nano-technology, give me the motivation to continue abroad and precisely at INL to bring back the appropriate knowledge to my country.

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