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As a senior three student, I deeply feel that studies in Senior 3 is not easy-not only should revise all the knowlege you have learned again, but also get good grades in the college entrance examination. Under the stress from society, parents and students themselves, students in Senior 3’s mentality becomes a problem. In fact, I think students maintaining a positive altitude is a key point on their ways to success. Mentality can help them overcome quite a few difficulties.
Adjusting state of mind is work that should be done by all senior three students. I think that relax a little in the rest of time while study deeply into knowledges such as going out for a walk, is a good way. What’s more, do not take too much care of grades. Don’t feel regretful if only we try. The best and happiest thing in senior three come from struggling and keeping busy, so don’t add to much stress to yourself.
In terms of schools, I think they are not supposed to attach great importance to enrollment rate. Students in senior high still need space and environment of freedom. It’s supposed to put students mental health ahead of enrollment rate. Encourage them to take enough activities to enrich study life in senior three. School’s value guidance is very important for students’ development. Hope that schools can promote students’ all round develpment with relaxed smile.
Above are my suggestions. They are for reference only. I hope heartily that students live happily and success in the college entrance examination!
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