0
Jennifermk Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
HELP TO CORRECT GRAMMAR MISTAKES
The younger generations, are Sek-Lung's sister and brothers. Sek-Lung spent more time with his
grandmother because of his mistaken TB infection; as a result, he did not start school with other
kids at the age of five. He was not happy to see his grandmother high fever, because, he could not
imagine living without her. He spent all of his childhood with her. They did everything together. For
example, they were digging their neighbour's garbage cans looking for treasure. This embarrassed
Sek-Lung's brothers and sister. Because of that older brother Jung told his father "All of our friends
are laughing at us!" No matter what his siblings said, Sek-Lung defended his grandmother. Instead,
they went shopping trips together. Most memorable moment of Sek-Lung with his grandmother was
her teaching him how to make windchimes.
Finally, grandmother fever was extreme higher and Sek-Lung's father took her to the hospital. She
agreed this time. However, Sek-Lung was not permitted to visit. Few days later, she died. She was
83 years old.
grandmother because of his mistaken TB infection; as a result, he did not start school with other
kids at the age of five. He was not happy to see his grandmother high fever, because, he could not
imagine living without her. He spent all of his childhood with her. They did everything together. For
example, they were digging their neighbour's garbage cans looking for treasure. This embarrassed
Sek-Lung's brothers and sister. Because of that older brother Jung told his father "All of our friends
are laughing at us!" No matter what his siblings said, Sek-Lung defended his grandmother. Instead,
they went shopping trips together. Most memorable moment of Sek-Lung with his grandmother was
her teaching him how to make windchimes.
Finally, grandmother fever was extreme higher and Sek-Lung's father took her to the hospital. She
agreed this time. However, Sek-Lung was not permitted to visit. Few days later, she died. She was
83 years old.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
0 Answers
Related Questions