help to check my motivation letter, Thanks

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01i01b00Norman Vincent Peale 02b02i00once said: 02br
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01i00”02i00People become really quite remarkable when they start thinking that they can do things. When they believe in themselves they have the first secret of success.”02br
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00I came to know that if I set clear goals and work hard, I could envision my future and direct the path of my life. I have envisaged several plans for my future. Attending XY is one of them.02br
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00Am I motivated? For me is no question. ”00Motivation comes from within.00” 00I’m in the same opinion. When I’m drawing sketchers, there is always the motivation what gets me started. Again- and again gives me inspiration what keeps me gonig. The new ideas and the desire for their realization incite me that I have to continue, to be better, to develop myself and increase my kills.02br
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00I participated in a Fashion Design Course for half year. During this time I was increasingly realized, that I can’t imagine any other things than to be a fashion designer. I love every moment and every part of it, which is my passion. 02br
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00In the summer I worked in a Fashion Designer shop for a shop assistant two months. I have really enjoyed it. This work experience has helped a lot to me to use my skills.02br
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00I have heard a lot good things about XY, which has got a very good reputation. When I found the XY course, I have immediately known, this is the place where I have to go. For the question: ”Why am i the right person for the course?” can I say that I have the suitable ability and the motivation. It’s clear to me that the XY course is the perfect course, which I can attend. I’m confident that XY is the Best choice for shaping my future the way I imagine. I’m sure about my decision to pursue on the XY course, and I feel I will able to excel in this field, because it is something that I’m extremely interested in studying and that I will enjoy doing.02br
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00I’m determined to become an exceptional candidate for the fashion area by the time I finish my studies in XY. I believe that XY is the ideal school for me and that I’m just the right student for it.02br
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00I think to be motivated is more than saying words or writing sentences. You have to do something for it. I think I did the first step, when I applied to XY.02br
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00I look forward to hearing from You0-