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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Hello! My name is Elizabeth I from Russia) I study at the University of Finance in Moscow. Please help me with the correct spelling of this little text (I need to present this text scientific community):
Abstract.

Importance. In modern world, the population is increasingly exposed to attacks of fraud in the course of their daily activities. In the case of crisis, the number of individuals, tend to fraudulently achieve someone else's property, during the crisis period increased as well as the harm caused to victims becomes more significant. All this items create negative sentiments in the society. The degree of trust of citizens to the scammers directly affected by the level of financial literacy. Financial literacy is a set of knowledge and skills for cooperation with financial institutions in the country. Studying the specific of functioning of all financial institutions, the citizen reduces the possibility of of being cheated by scammers and increases the chance to save their property.

Objective. The article considers such categories as the level of financial literacy of the Russian population, the degree of citizens' trust in financial institutions, the impact of these indicators on the level of personal and national economic security. The objective of the article is analysis of the degree of influence of financial literacy on the degree of interaction of the population with financial institutions and on the level of economic security of the country.

Methods. We used the methods of analysis and synthesis, induction and deduction, method of comparison, system analysis, sample surveys, statistics.

Conclusions and Relevance. The low level of financial literacy of the population leads to increased levels of distrust of financial institutions, especially in the crisis period. Russia's population is less begins to consume financial services, which negatively affects the banking sector, and reduces the level of economic security of the country.

I used Google translator, so I doubt the correctness of grammar. Help me, and I will help you;) Write, I am a very sociable person.
  

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Importance. In the modern world (In our advanced societies) , the population is people are increasingly exposed to attacks of fraud in the course of their daily activities. In the case of crisis, the number of individuals, tend to fraudulently achieve someone else's property, during the crisis period increased (I don't understand the underlined.

  • Importance.
  • In the modern world (In our advanced societies) , the population is people are increasingly exposed to attacks of fraud in the course of their daily activities.
  • In the case of crisis, the number of individuals, tend to fraudulently achieve someone else's property, during the crisis period increased (I don't understand the underlined.
  • Please write very simple sentences.
  • We can make them longer later.
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Importance. In the modern world (In our advanced societies), the population is people are increasingly exposed to attacks of fraud in the course of their daily activities. In the case of crisis, the number of individuals, tend to fraudulently achieve someone else's property, during the crisis period increased (I don't understand the underlined. Please write ver

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