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Topic: the renewable resources of energy, such as sun, wind, water, will soon replace fossils fuels such as gases, oil, and coal

Nowadays, there is an increasingly tendency that the globe citizens are becoming use the renewable resources of energy. It is unfamiliar for us to witness our neighbors use the machine received the sun to cooking or bathing in their houses. Thus, a problem arises: will the renewable resources of energy, such as sun, wind, water, soon replace fossils fuels such as gases, oil, and coal? While someone agrees with this argument, I hardly agree.

First and foremost, the renewable resources of energy are not available in the globe. For instance, the water energy must be obtained near a place, which has so much water that produce the motivation to electrical power. Furthermore, even if we possesses the premises of exerting this kind of energy, it is also exist an inevitable fact that different areas haven't the same quality of energy-may be this place have smaller and another owns larger.

Secondly, the highly cost of applying the renewable energy cannot predict and evaluate completely. According to a survey conducted by the national energy Bureau, 80 percent of the national finance has authorized to appropriate the state where financial invest is making all efforts to tap the wind energy. Dose it sound incredible? This results in the more seriously consequence that the amount number of national finance being occupied in this use cannot help the people in need.

In a word, I advocate the statement that renewable resources of energy, such as sun, wind, water, will not soon replace fossils fuels such as gases, oil, and coal. Because of the convenient and broadly use, the fossils fuels such as gases, oil, and coal are not doomed to be substituted.