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00This is my first post on this website, I do hope I am writing in the right section for what I'm about to ask. 02br
00I have just completed writing my CV and Cover Letter to apply for a job in London, and I'd like somebody to give a look at it. I don't need you to evaluate the content, but only the way it is written. 02br
00Here it goes (I'll paste just some extracts), thank you VERY much for any suggestion/correction you might want to post.02br
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01b00Personal profile02b02br
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00Graduate structural engineer, numerically confident and analytical in approach; reliable and conscientious; able to manage time effectively and comfortable working independently as well as part of a team; able to organize, prioritize and carry out multiple duties in order to meet deadlines; accurate and methodical; looking forward to working towards chartership and transferring the academic knowledge into a high-level professional activity. 02br
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01b00Education02b02br
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001999-200600 00Master’s degree in Civil Engineering; 00 00specialization in structural engineering.02br
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00 00Politecnico di Milano (Milano University of Technology), 00.02br
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00 00Thesis: Thermo-mechanical characterization of high-strength self-compacting concrete exposed to high temperatures.00 02br
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00 00Final mark: 93/10002br
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002002-200300 00Helsinki 00. Exchange student.02br
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001994-199900 00Liceo Scientifico L. Cremona, 00.02br
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00 00Secondary School with emphasis on scientific subjects.02br
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00 00Final mark: 100/10002br
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01b00Technical skills02b02br
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00§00 00Solid and extensive theoretical background. Subjects studied included: bridge engineering, structural analysis and design, seismic design, structural stability, dynamics of structures, hydraulic00 engineering, soil mechanics, advanced concrete and steel design, precast concrete structures, highway engineering.02br
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00§00 00Knowledge of British Standards and Eurocodes02br
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00§00 00Non-linear structural analysis with software packages such as Sap2000, Staad Pro, and Straus702br
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00§00 00Creation of designs and detailed drawings with AutoCAD02br
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00§00 00Basics of concrete and steel structure detailing with Graitec Advance and Tekla Structures02br
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00§00 00Structural design for fire safety02br
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00§00 00Experimental methods and testing procedures for the assessment of structural material properties 02br
01b00Academic achievements02b02br
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00§00 00Vast experimental campaign in collaboration with Italcementi Group and development of innovative experimental techniques in assessing mechanical and thermal properties of self-compacting concrete. 02br
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00§00 00Publication of a scientific paper: [ ... ]02br
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00§00 00Development of full projects in different areas of study: post-tensioned concrete highway bridge; multi-storey steel building in seismic zone; precast industrial building; two-way mountain road.02br
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01b00COVER LETTER02b02br
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0022 February 200700 02br
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00Peter Morrison02br
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00Marketing Manager02br
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00ABC Inc.02br
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00Dear Mr. Morrison02br
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00I am writing to enquire whether you have a vacancy in your company for a graduate MSc structural engineer. I enclose a copy of my CV for your consideration.02br
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01span00During my studies I developed a broad theoretical background, provided by a full-time involvement in my academic studies. I also took part in different work groups, developing a variety of schemes from feasibility assessment to design and production of detailed definitive drawings. I was able to work under pressure and produced results at a short notice, meeting weekly deadlines. The experience has taught me the importance of teamwork.02span02br
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00For a year I worked in the laboratory of the structural engineering department at the Milan University of Technology, conducting a vast and important research project commissioned by Italcementi Group for the assessment of mechanical and thermal properties of self-compacting concrete. I was able to maintain a high standard of work throughout the whole project, even when under pressure and on tight deadlines. My approach was methodical, and required minimum supervision. I was trusted with high-technology equipment and delicate testing procedures, being recognized as dependable and hard-working. The novelty of the experimental results led to the publication of a scientific paper that will also be presented in a major international conference in mid June 2007.02br
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00I studied for a year at the Helsinki University of Technology within the Erasmus programme. This experience has been essential in developing a good capability to adapt to change as well as excellent interpersonal skills.02br
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01span00I have excellent computer skills and I am proficient with finite element analysis packages as well as with computer-aided design software. I have always enjoyed learning how to use new software applications; at the moment I am studying two major structure detailing software such as Graitec Advance and Tekla Structures. I have a good knowledge of the most important codes of practise, including the British standards and the Eurocodes.00 02span02br
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01span00My ambition leads me to look forward to a continuous professional development. I look forward to pursue a professional certification as well as constantly update my technical skills, both through further education and experience in the field. I am looking for a stimulating and challenging job that would provide me with the opportunity to use my technical abilities as well as my problem-solving skills.02span02br
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00Thank you for your time reviewing my credentials. I look forward to a personal interview at your convenience.02br
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00Yours sincerely,02br
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00[name omitted]02br
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