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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago

Help! Simple request for all the poetic people out there!

Hi guys,

I have a short phrase that I would like to add as a nice caption to a picture. The picture shows the backs of a couple walking under one small unbrella in the rain. This is the phrase:

'No matter how difficult the journey may seem, we will make it through'



I would like to make this crude phrase sound more poetic or at least more soothing to the ears. Please help me. The more suggestions, the better. Your suggestion counts! Thanks in advance, I appreciate you sharing your brain cells Emotion: smile
  

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Well, at least make it shorter: No matter how difficult the journey, we will make it through .

  • Well, at least make it shorter: No matter how difficult the journey, we will make it through .
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Well, at least make it shorter:

No matter how difficult the journey, we will make it through.
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Okay lets see..

First, I wonder if you wanna keep it rhyming with "through" -- the sound /u:/

and Secondly, I wonder if you want to stick to the same words!!

well, check this:

"The journey, no matter how difficult it seems, we'll make it through"

Or

"The journey may seems difficult, though we will make it through"

Or

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