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JimmyH Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Help rephrase sentence

I need help rephrasing this sentence. Thanks


With data services not just limited to cell phones but also to meet the demands of industry applications with connected autonomous driving through vehicle-to-vehicle communication being the most emerging example, the need for high speed and reliable data services is inevitable.

  

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To make this clearer, break up the long sentence into shorter ones. For example: Data services are not just limited to cell phones. Today they must also meet the wide-ranging demands of industry.

  • To make this clearer, break up the long sentence into shorter ones.
  • For example: Data services are not just limited to cell phones.
  • Today they must also meet the wide-ranging demands of industry.
  • Emerging applications include autonomous driving through vehicle-to-vehicle communication.
  • Given this, the need for high speed and reliable data services is unavoidable.
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To make this clearer, break up the long sentence into shorter ones. For example:

Data services are not just limited to cell phones. Today they must also meet the wide-ranging demands of industry. Emerging applications include autonomous driving through vehicle-to-vehicle communication. Given this, the need for high speed and reliable data services is unavoidable.

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