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M131294 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Help pleasee !

hey, can you please edit/rewrite this paragraph for me? thank you

Young women in Australia are bombarded with images of what is considered to be the most desirable. The media today has encouraged young people to live in an unhealthy lifestyle due to the advanced in technologies. Little do they realise that pursuing a perfected body can lead to several types of eating disorders that is most prevalent in the teenage society. By risking their physical condition teenagers need to be more aware of the dangers that they are putting to their health. And by doing so, a documentary on the concepts of how the body image distortions can affect adolescences and why this controversial issue needs to be improved is proposed.
  
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