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Lu14 Posted 10 years ago
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hello, can someone corrected that for me please?
We are going to boarding in Ljubljana at 2 pm. Our guide will wait you after the airport security checking. If everything be okey, we will arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am. Then we are going to check in our hotel Ming Wah International Convention Centre. First sight that we are going to see is Man Mo Temple. In Tim Ho Wan lunch is going to wait for us. Delicious food is served there. After the lunch we are going to to see Clock Tower and then we are going to Tshim Sha Tsui Promenade. There you will have a choise where you go. You can visit Space Museum or Cultural Centre. Around 7 pm are we going to have dinner at our hotel. After a long day, we all will need to sleep well for next day, for new adventures.
The second day we are going to start with breakfast at our wonderful hotel. Next step of our journey is in ocean park hong kong. This water park offer you a great opportunity for having fun. New day, new location for lunch. That day we are going to having lunch at Megan's Kitchen. After lunch we are going to to climb the hill wher the home of Big Buddha is. Around 5 o'clock is planned to visit Temple Street Night Market. Following is the dinner at our hotel and then sleeping.
Our third day will be started also in our hotel with breakfast. Immediately after breakfast, we are going to Hong Kong Disneyland. Because we are going to be there most of the day, a lunch is included. We are going to se also Wong Tai Sin Temple and after that we are going to have a dinner at Aqua Spirit. On the way back to the hotel we are going to see even Lan Kwai Fong.
We are going to boarding in Ljubljana at 2 pm. Our guide will wait you after the airport security checking. If everything be okey, we will arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am. Then we are going to check in our hotel Ming Wah International Convention Centre. First sight that we are going to see is Man Mo Temple. In Tim Ho Wan lunch is going to wait for us. Delicious food is served there. After the lunch we are going to to see Clock Tower and then we are going to Tshim Sha Tsui Promenade. There you will have a choise where you go. You can visit Space Museum or Cultural Centre. Around 7 pm are we going to have dinner at our hotel. After a long day, we all will need to sleep well for next day, for new adventures.
The second day we are going to start with breakfast at our wonderful hotel. Next step of our journey is in ocean park hong kong. This water park offer you a great opportunity for having fun. New day, new location for lunch. That day we are going to having lunch at Megan's Kitchen. After lunch we are going to to climb the hill wher the home of Big Buddha is. Around 5 o'clock is planned to visit Temple Street Night Market. Following is the dinner at our hotel and then sleeping.
Our third day will be started also in our hotel with breakfast. Immediately after breakfast, we are going to Hong Kong Disneyland. Because we are going to be there most of the day, a lunch is included. We are going to se also Wong Tai Sin Temple and after that we are going to have a dinner at Aqua Spirit. On the way back to the hotel we are going to see even Lan Kwai Fong.
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) at 2 pm. Our guide will wait for you after the you pass through airport security checking . If everything is okay , we will arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am.
- ) at 2 pm.
- Our guide will wait for you after the you pass through airport security checking .
- If everything is okay , we will arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am.
- Then we are going to check in to our hotel at the Ming Wah International Convention Centre.
- The f irst stop on the tour t hat we are going to see is Man Mo Temple.
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We are going to boarding in Ljubljana (I don't understand this.) at 2 pm. Our guide will wait for you after the you pass through airport security checking. If everything is okay, we will arrive in Hong Kong at 9 am. Then we are going to check into our hotel at the Ming Wah International Convention Centre. The firs
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Thank you very much!
In the first sentence I mean that we are going to board on the plane on Ljubljana's airport.
In the first sentence I mean that we are going to board on the plane on Ljubljana's airport.
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I wish people wouldn't post the same thing to the forum more than once! 
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lu14we are going to board on the plane on Ljubljana's airport.We are go to Ljubljana's airport to catch our plane to Hong Kong.
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AlpheccaStarsWe are go to Ljubljana's airport to catch our plane to Hong Kong.I suppose AlpheccaStars meant to write "We are going ..." instead. However, I still don't think that would be natural; one wouldn't say, e.g., "We are going to New York's airport ..."
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teechrI suppose AlpheccaStars meant to write "We are goingYes, it was my typo.
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