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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Help! Please.

I have looked at these sentences until my eyes hurt:

I had worn a fringe jacket until I was told that it was thirty years out of date; now I wear fleece.

I wore a fringe jacket until I was told that it was thirty years out of date; now I wear fleece.

First of all, I know there are better ways to express this (these?) ideas. Also, I know that the person who wrote this test is trying to demonstrate the use of the past perfect tense. It just seems like a very awkward way to do it.

Personally, I don't see any difference in meaning when the simple past is used in this expression, and feels better (to me). Of course I could be only marginally literate.

Any feedback would be a great relief to my head.

Thanks!
  

Top answer

There is no call for the past perfect here. This is fine, and needs no improvement: I wore a fringe jacket until I was told that it was thirty years out of date; now I wear fleece.

  • There is no call for the past perfect here.
  • This is fine, and needs no improvement: I wore a fringe jacket until I was told that it was thirty years out of date; now I wear fleece.
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There is no call for the past perfect here. This is fine, and needs no improvement: I wore a fringe jacket until I was told that it was thirty years out of date; now I wear fleece.
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