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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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We will arrange PO 123 to be consolidated with our other vendor in Hong Kong. The consolidation details will be advised to Ling soon.
As per our discussion last week, there is no results show in ABC's inspection report. Would you please revise and send back to us?
As per our discussion last week, there is no results show in ABC's inspection report. Would you please revise and send back to us?
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I would change to the following- We will arrange for PO 123 to be consolidated with our other vender in Hong Kong. The consolidation details will be given to Ling soon. Per our discussion last week, there are no results shown on ABC's inspection report.
- I would change to the following- We will arrange for PO 123 to be consolidated with our other vender in Hong Kong.
- The consolidation details will be given to Ling soon.
- Per our discussion last week, there are no results shown on ABC's inspection report.
- I would like to ask for your review.
- Feel free to make revisions before sending this back to us.
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I would change to the following-
We will arrange for PO 123 to be consolidated with our other vender in Hong Kong. The consolidation details will be given to Ling soon.
Per our discussion last week, there are no results shown on ABC's inspection report. I would like to ask for your review. Feel free to make revisions before sending this back to us.
We will arrange for PO 123 to be consolidated with our other vender in Hong Kong. The consolidation details will be given to Ling soon.
Per our discussion last week, there are no results shown on ABC's inspection report. I would like to ask for your review. Feel free to make revisions before sending this back to us.
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