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Tuongvan Posted 17 years ago
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Help please
Dear teachers,
Could you please help edit my translation of a graduation diploma issued by the Ministry of Education in my country?
GRADUATION DIPLOMA OF SENIOR SECONDARY EDUCATION
is conferred on (student's name) born on Sept.20,1991 in HCM City
who has successfully passed the graduation examination of the senior secondary education.
Session on May 05th,2006, held at Nguyen Thi Khai Examination Center .
Rating/Ranking: Average/Fairy good/Good/Excellent
September 10th,2007
For the Director of Education and training Service
Vice Director
(signed and sealed)
NGYH NBH ANH
Thank you in advance
Could you please help edit my translation of a graduation diploma issued by the Ministry of Education in my country?
GRADUATION DIPLOMA OF SENIOR SECONDARY EDUCATION
is conferred on (student's name) born on Sept.20,1991 in HCM City
who has successfully passed the graduation examination of the senior secondary education.
Session on May 05th,2006, held at Nguyen Thi Khai Examination Center .
Rating/Ranking: Average/Fairy good/Good/Excellent
September 10th,2007
For the Director of Education and training Service
Vice Director
(signed and sealed)
NGYH NBH ANH
Thank you in advance
Top answer
SENIOR SECONDARY SCHOOL DIPLOMA Conferred on (student's name) , born 20 September 1991 in Ho Chi Minh City , who has successfully passed the graduation examination for senior secondary education on 5 May 2006 at Nguyen Thi Khai Examination Center . Rating : Average / Fairly Good / Good / Excellent 10 September 2007 For the Director of Education and Training Service NGYH NBH ANH Vice Director (signed and sealed)
- SENIOR SECONDARY SCHOOL DIPLOMA Conferred on (student's name) , born 20 September 1991 in Ho Chi Minh City , who has successfully passed the graduation examination for senior secondary education on 5 May 2006 at Nguyen Thi Khai Examination Center .
- Rating : Average / Fairly Good / Good / Excellent 10 September 2007 For the Director of Education and Training Service NGYH NBH ANH Vice Director (signed and sealed)
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SENIOR SECONDARY SCHOOL DIPLOMA
Conferred on (student's name), born 20 September 1991 in Ho Chi Minh City, who has successfully passed the graduation examination for senior secondary education on 5 May 2006 at Nguyen Thi Khai Examination Center.
Rating: Average / Fairly Good / Good /
SENIOR SECONDARY SCHOOL DIPLOMA
Conferred on (student's name), born 20 September 1991 in Ho Chi Minh City, who has successfully passed the graduation examination for senior secondary education on 5 May 2006 at Nguyen Thi Khai Examination Center.
Rating: Average / Fairly Good / Good /
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Thank you Mister Micawber very much, but could you possibly explain why you don't use ON in the following sentence:
born 20 September 1991 . Why not: born ON 20 September 1991
Best wishes
born 20 September 1991 . Why not: born ON 20 September 1991
Best wishes
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