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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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i'm not an english native unfourtntly, but i must improve m english. i wrote a latter 10 hours ago and i asked for help to check it and correct the mistakes...
i really need your help and it is really short. please look at it...and if you cant please tell me where in what website someone can check it???
I need to write a latter to a sick child
Dear Philip
I hope you feel well. It's very frustrating to know that you've got a problem and further more to know that you can't deal with your illness.
I'm happy that your family support you. It's meaningful for you and it can help youto get over the difficult periods when the pain gets strong.
When something hurt to me ' I think about a place, which I wish to be in. like beach. I just fantasy about a hilarious vacation.
You are a valiant and brilliant guy . I know that you can survive it. I wish that next year it all will be over and both of us will travel to .
I have been there once, but I want to be there and to have fun again with you. We'll have a great time together!
With all my love and appreciation
Yours forever
Def
i really need your help and it is really short. please look at it...and if you cant please tell me where in what website someone can check it???
I need to write a latter to a sick child
Dear Philip
I hope you feel well. It's very frustrating to know that you've got a problem and further more to know that you can't deal with your illness.
I'm happy that your family support you. It's meaningful for you and it can help youto get over the difficult periods when the pain gets strong.
When something hurt to me ' I think about a place, which I wish to be in. like beach. I just fantasy about a hilarious vacation.
You are a valiant and brilliant guy . I know that you can survive it. I wish that next year it all will be over and both of us will travel to .
I have been there once, but I want to be there and to have fun again with you. We'll have a great time together!
With all my love and appreciation
Yours forever
Def
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Dear Philip, I hope you feel well. It's very frustrating to know that you've got a problem and furthermore to know that you can't deal with your illness. I'm happy that your family is supporting you.
- Dear Philip, I hope you feel well.
- It's very frustrating to know that you've got a problem and furthermore to know that you can't deal with your illness.
- I'm happy that your family is supporting you.
- It's meaningful for you and it can help you to get over the difficult periods when the pain gets strong.
- When something hurts me, I think about a place that I wish to be, like a California beach.
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Dear Philip,
I hope you feel well. It's very frustrating to know that you've got a problem and furthermore to know that you can't deal with your illness. I'm happy that your family is supporting you. It's meaningful for you and it can help you to get over the difficult periods when the pain gets strong. When something hurts me, I think about a place t
Dear Philip,
I hope you feel well. It's very frustrating to know that you've got a problem and furthermore to know that you can't deal with your illness. I'm happy that your family is supporting you. It's meaningful for you and it can help you to get over the difficult periods when the pain gets strong. When something hurts me, I think about a place t
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