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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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I have had sex with 16 girls during last 7 month and mostly unsafe sex . Now I wonder whether I have affected with HIV because I have been seeing rashes inside the mouth for the last 4 months. But it would endure only for 5 or 6 days then it would disappear. It comes again when I have sex again with a girl and it will endure again 5 or 6 days.

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I have had *** with 16 girls during the last 7 month s and mostly unsafe *** . Now I wonder whether I have affected been infected with HIV because I have been seeing rashes inside the my mouth for the last 4 months. But it would endure last only for for only 5 or 6 days and then it would disappear.

  • I have had *** with 16 girls during the last 7 month s and mostly unsafe *** .
  • Now I wonder whether I have affected been infected with HIV because I have been seeing rashes inside the my mouth for the last 4 months.
  • But it would endure last only for for only 5 or 6 days and then it would disappear.
  • It comes again when I have *** again with a girl , and it will endure lasts again for 5 or 6 days.
  • I hope this is a letter to your doctor, and that you are going to change your habits with regard to unsafe *** before it's too late.
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I have had *** with 16 girls during the last 7 months and mostly unsafe *** . Now I wonder whether I have affected been infected with HIV because I have been seeing rashes inside the my mouth for the last 4 months. But it would end
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Thank you.

This is second and last paragraph in my writing. Please correct it also :

But the rash which I have mainly comes in the tongue, and not severe rashes. When I searched for "rashes in mouth" pictures in Google. I found very severe or dangerous rashes. But for me the rash is a light one just like a very tiny round shaped and red in colour.
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But the rash which I have appears mainly comes in the on my tongue and is not severe rashes. When I searched for "rashes in mouth" pictures in on Google, I found

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