Help, Personal statement
Hello guys, would you tell me your opinions, and correct my personal statement, please.
The world of computers is growing at an un-recordable rate everyday, computers are the most influential tools in our lives, they are our present and future. this world of computing has fascinated me since i was in my high school there i did my best and i worked harder to get my baccalureat with high degree, than i joined the best computer science school in my country, where i learned the basics of computer science and i got a large experience.in my school i learned the team work laws and this happened after working in many projects with several students,fist of all in february- march 2016 i was Developer of a Mini-Shell Linux application using C programming language , and in april 2016 i developed a software for managing sales of tickets and subscriptions in train stations (java), in mai 2016 i was the developer of a question answer game, object-oriented in Java, and since february until mai 2016 i was Administrator Database (XML) and i worked with a team of 5 persons for the realization of a fingerprint minutiae detection application for biometric identification (we used C++ programming language and XML, wxWidget libruary and Visual Studio software )and in the end of my scond year in my school i passed a national contest to ensure a place with the third year students in my school, in september 2017 i worked in the realization of an educational application for the manipulation of the automata used by the compilers of the programming languages using C , in march 2017 i was Network administrator in a project to set up a LAN / WAN network for 2 major engineering schools using Cisco packet tracer, and in April-Mai 2017 i worked with team of 5 persons in the Provision of an Integrated and Technological Solution for the Installation of a System Remote Assistance Program for Patients, all this was beside mathemathics modules, database (MySQL) and electronis ...
I am hard working and currently work in an android application and Also in my vacation i try to learn new programming languages and to know more about this inlimited computer science word,
to devellop my skills and to learn an amazing experience i want to continue my career abroad, i want to work with different students to be more flexible and confident
Thank you,
Top answer
First, there is no such word as " i " in the English language, unless you are referring to the 9th letter of the alphabet. Second, every sentence begins with a capital letter. Proper nouns begin with a capital letter.
- First, there is no such word as " i " in the English language, unless you are referring to the 9th letter of the alphabet.
- Second, every sentence begins with a capital letter.
- Proper nouns begin with a capital letter.
- Common nouns do not.
- Third, do not join sentences with a comma.
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First, there is no such word as " i " in the English language, unless you are referring to the 9th letter of the alphabet.
Second, every sentence begins with a capital letter. Proper nouns begin with a capital letter. Common nouns do not.
Third, do not join sentences with a comma. The mark of the end of a sentence can be a full stop, (.) question mark (?) or exclamation mark (!)
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