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Help!!, one paragraph of a recommendation letters need revise, give me a ha

0give me a hand ,thank you very much, I dout about the correction of my enlish expression in the following passage, please give me some suggestion. thank you , it is very important for my applicaion . thank you again .02br
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00Mr. xx has taken part into the CUMCM Contest(China Undergraduate Mathematical Contest in Modeling) for several times and received a great achievement with a Second prize in National contest region and a First prize in the Guangdong Province contest region. As his contest advisor, I found that he was one of the most dedicated of my students. He always came to my discussion sessions, asked meaningful questions, and frequently volunteered to present his work. What’s more, he is good at English both in reading and wiritting mathematical materials, which can be showed from his work of helping me translate the mathematical materials into English I needed in the lessons. 02br
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0Mr. *** has taken part into the CUMCM Contest (China Undergraduate Mathematical Contest in Modeling) several times, and he received a great achievement with a second place award at the national contest region and a first place award in the Guangdong Province region. As his contest advisor, I found that he was one of my most dedicated students.

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  • *** has taken part into the CUMCM Contest (China Undergraduate Mathematical Contest in Modeling) several times, and he received a great achievement with a second place award at the national contest region and a first place award in the Guangdong Province region.
  • As his contest advisor, I found that he was one of my most dedicated students.
  • At discussion sessions, he always asked meaningful questions and frequently volunteered to present his work.
  • Additionally, he is very proficient at English, both in reading and writing mathematical materials.
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0Mr. *** has taken part into the CUMCM Contest (China Undergraduate Mathematical Contest in Modeling) several times, and he received a great achievement with a second place award at the national contest region and a first place award in the Guangdong Province region. As his contest advisor, I found that he was one of my most dedicated students. At discussion sessions, he always asked meaningfu
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00very very appreciate you, fast reply than i tought. I have viewed this forum for a long time and learned more for improving my english, thanks for all persons who volunteer to help us english learners.02br
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00 Helping us to revise english articles may cost much time , what do you think about this non-profitable helping.02br
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0I think it's a nice thing to be able to help someone else. I'm glad the forum has proved helpfu for you - and good luck with your application!0-
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0It's sure! English Forums is a great forum, it also helps me a lot!0-

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