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Yjl Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Help needed on an epitaph
I'm drafting the epitaph for my deceased parents and wish some English guru rectify it. It reads:
Here rest beloved Mother, GM and Father, GF enduring blighted nobility inherited spiritually beyond well-being, achieving the dreamland after a humble life.
Here rest beloved Mother, GM and Father, GF enduring blighted nobility inherited spiritually beyond well-being, achieving the dreamland after a humble life.
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Hello, yjl—and welcome to English Forums. yjl enduring blighted nobility Oh, my! I don't know quite what that means, but it sounds terrible!
- Hello, yjl—and welcome to English Forums.
- yjl enduring blighted nobility Oh, my!
- I don't know quite what that means, but it sounds terrible!
- Was your father a haemophilic king?
- Try rather something simpler, like this: Here rest beloved Mother, GM and Father, GF, who have achieved the glory of heaven after a good and humble life.
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Hello, yjl—and welcome to English Forums.
Here rest beloved Mother, GM and Father, GF, who have achieved the glory of heaven after a good and humble life.
yjlenduring blighted nobilityOh, my! I don't know quite what that means, but it sounds terrible! Was your father a haemophilic king? Try rather something simpler, like this:
Here rest beloved Mother, GM and Father, GF, who have achieved the glory of heaven after a good and humble life.
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