help needed in universitary motivation letter.

0Hello everybody! I'm from barcelona and I'm going to study abroad! they ask me to send a motivation letter.02br
02br
00This letter is very important for me, I've done my best but I suppose it's full of mistakes, if someone could check it a little bit so I could send it a bit more calmed would be perfect.02br
02br
00Thank you very much.02br
02br
01font00Dear Sir or Madam,02font02br
02br
01font02font02br
02br
01font00Once finished my Engineering studies specialised in product design at the Universitat Politècnica de Catalunya, and participating with the Erasmus program, I’d like to make my Master’s Thesis at the Industrial Design Engineering department from the TU Delft University.02font02br
02br
01font02font02br
02br
01font00Some years ago, arrived the point to choose my intensification inside the wide world of engineering, I didn’t have too many troubles to choose Product Design between many other engineering branches that also claimed my interest as my speciality. Product Design is what I like, is what I do better, furthermore I think that it’s at it’s very peak and every day more valuated inside the business world. Once finished my studies I’m requested to make a project to “capture all I’ve learned during all this years”, I consider that the Master’s Thesis is not a way to demonstrate what you’ve learned, but a perfect way to continue my formation, and I think that TU Delft University is a very good place to acquire it. 02font02br
02br
01font02font02br
02br
01font00I’m feeling very fortunate that my university has given me the chance to apply for the opportunity to study at TU Delft. What motivated me the most to complete my engineering studies at your university, leaving apart it’s reputation at world-wide level, was the wide thematic diversification that you include in one single campus and specially the seriousness and rigor with which the different projects are carried out inside the Industrial Design Engineering department, which is a distinguishing factor of TU Delft respect many other universities.02font02br
02br
01font02font02br
02br
01font00I feel able to develop a good master’s thesis, and in addition I have the desire to do it. I consider that TU Delft University has a lot to teach me and I think that I’ve got much to contribute to TU Delft.02font02br
02br
01font02font02br
02br
01font00Don’t leave making me arrive any doubt, restlessness or commentary, which I will keenly answer back as soon as possible.02font0-