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Dear Kelly,

I hope you’re doing good. I need a transcript of my degree in German language, and I’m writing this letter to request you to help me in this regard since you have expertise in this language.

My transcript of bachelor’s degree is in English language, but the University of Subbery in Germany has asked to submit the document in their local language which is German. Although they have accepted my other documents of English, they want the transcript in German because of legal requirement.

If I don’t submit the said document by the end of next week, it is possible that they will cancel my admission, and I’ll lose the scholarship of USD 100,000. This is crucial for my career because my father doesn’t have money to support my educational expenses of masters in Germany.

Will you be able to come tomorrow at my home after office? I know it is difficult for you to take some time out due to year end activities, but I hope that you’ll surely help me.

Take care and write back soon.

Regards,

Peter