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People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

It is believed that people of urban areas face numerous problems on daily basis. The main difficulties which they encounter are traffic jams and rising pollution. In my opinion, instead of encouraging people to move to smaller regions, governments should provide them with facilities unavailable in these areas.

Traffic congestion and high pollution are the primary difficulties people of large cities are facing. Alarming increase in number of vehicles and growing industrialization have caused these problems as they emit hazardous gases, such as carbon dioxide, methane and zinc in the atmosphere. As a result, many citizens suffer from chronic diseases namely, lung cancer and asthma. For example, London has recoded the highest number of cars and factories recently due to which frequent traffic jams and pollution have become a norm there.

Numerous smaller towns lack the basic facilities of education and health which government can provide the people there, in order to discourage them from moving to urban areas. Quality education and proper health facilities are two basic things which people need so that they can live their life and these facilities are hardly available in most of the rural areas. Consequently, people move to large cities where they look for these basic necessities of life. The population of Hyderabad, a smaller town of Pakistan, for instance, has seen a dramatic drop because its citizens were suffering from unavailability of primary education and proper medical treatment for their children.

To conclude, traffic congestion and increasing pollution are the main problems for people of large cities which they face in their everyday life. If a government provides the basic necessities to people who are living in smaller regions, they will not move to urban areas.