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Kathirkaman Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Help needed in editing a sentence
I've the following sentence:
This article has put forth as much as known about body image and dance or aesthetic sports as well has hypothesized framework for understanding these findings
Is the above correct as given? If not, what would be the correct edited version for the above?
This article has put forth as much as known about body image and dance or aesthetic sports as well has hypothesized framework for understanding these findings
Is the above correct as given? If not, what would be the correct edited version for the above?
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This is clearer: This article has presented all that is known about body image and dance or aesthetic sports , and it has hypothesized a framework for understanding these findings.
- This is clearer: This article has presented all that is known about body image and dance or aesthetic sports , and it has hypothesized a framework for understanding these findings.
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This is clearer:
This article has presented all that is known about body image and dance or aesthetic sports, and it has hypothesized a framework for understanding these findings.
This article has presented all that is known about body image and dance or aesthetic sports, and it has hypothesized a framework for understanding these findings.
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Yes, this is more clearer than the original version. Thanks Micawber.
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