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X_K Posted 18 years ago
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I'm writing an email to a british film agency requesting them for a quotation, can you please help me to make it sound more professional?

Dear Catie,

Hope everything is going well.

We've finaly got the TVC (tv commercial) project moving and I really hope my management can make their decision before end of summer so we could start filming in September-October.

I still have your old quote for the TVC and I assume prices most probably have changed so I'll appreciate if you could update me on your new rates.

We also thought of redoing our corporate video as well. Could you please email me a quote me for this too? Our old video is a 15 minutes film very similar to our old commercial.

Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Regards,

X
  

Top answer

Apart from one or two minor suggestions and typo corrections (below), I think this is good. The tone seems fine to me. Dear Catie, Hope everything is going well.

— Mr Wordy

  • Apart from one or two minor suggestions and typo corrections (below), I think this is good.
  • The tone seems fine to me.
  • Dear Catie, Hope everything is going well.
  • We've finally got the TVC ( TV C ommercial) project moving and I really hope my management can make their decision before the end of summer so we can start filming in September-October.
  • I still have your old quote for the TVC , but I assume prices most probably have changed so I'd appreciate it if you could update me on your new rates.
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Apart from one or two minor suggestions and typo corrections (below), I think this is good. The tone seems fine to me.

Dear Catie,

Hope everything is going well.

We've finally got the TVC (TV Commercial) project moving and I really hope my management can make their decision before
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