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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Tagore first established the conflict between Govinda and Satyabati when, Satyabit first realized that her husband death changed quite clearly. The responsibity for his det0ridden property was left in the hands of Dovina and Satyabti and her son are place completly under the care of Dovinda. Things between them didn't go smooth. From the very first day Govinda made it ckear ti Satabti that money was the first and foremost thing in life. Satbayti would save her own money to buy what was needed in order to stay stable. Everything she did was done bt furtively. The conflict grew stronger when Dovinda snatched Chuni's pictures and tore it up leaving him burst out crying. His mother couldn't take more of Dovinda behaviour, she and her son left him.
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Tagore first established the conflict between Govinda and Satyabati when, Satyabit first realized that her husband death changed quite clearly. The responsibity for his det0ridden property was left in the hands of Dovina and Satyabti and her son are place completly under the care of Dovinda. Things between them didn't go smooth. From the very first day Govinda made it ckear ti Satabti that money was the first and foremost thing in life. Satbayti would save her own money to buy what was needed in order to stay stable. Everything she did was done bt furtively. The conflict grew stronger when Dovinda snatched Chuni's pictures and tore it up leaving him burst out crying. His mother couldn't take more of Dovinda behaviour, she and her son left him.
thank you.
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- Hi, Anon.
- There's quite a bit of work to be done here.
- While I support your anonymity, I'm sure you'd have better luck getting a job like this done were you to register a name.
- Rgdz, - A.
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Hi, Anon.
There's quite a bit of work to be done here. While I support your anonymity, I'm sure you'd have better luck getting a job like this done were you to register a name.
Rgdz, - A.
There's quite a bit of work to be done here. While I support your anonymity, I'm sure you'd have better luck getting a job like this done were you to register a name.
Rgdz, - A.
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