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Invalidid87 Posted 17 years ago
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Help me write better
I've written the following paragraph. I am sure that there are some mistakes {if not many} in it. It would be nice if someone can correct the errors and let me know the mistakes that I made. I can greatly improve my writing skills. 
"I am sure that the Americans can never forget the effect Hurrican Katrina had on them. Tens of thousands of people become homeless because of Katrina. My uncle who lived in the America at that time lost his son because of the Hurricane. Like thousands of Americans, I can never forget the Hurricane in my life"
"I am sure that the Americans can never forget the effect Hurrican Katrina had on them. Tens of thousands of people become homeless because of Katrina. My uncle who lived in the America at that time lost his son because of the Hurricane. Like thousands of Americans, I can never forget the Hurricane in my life"
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"I am sure that Americans can never forget the effects that Hurricane Katrina had on them. Tens of thousands of people became homeless and my uncle, who lived in America at the time, lost his son because of it. " Hope that helps.
- "I am sure that Americans can never forget the effects that Hurricane Katrina had on them.
- Tens of thousands of people became homeless and my uncle, who lived in America at the time, lost his son because of it.
- " Hope that helps.
- Michelle
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"I am sure that Americans can never forget the effects that Hurricane Katrina had on them. Tens of thousands of people became homeless and my uncle, who lived in America at the time, lost his son because of it. Like thousands of Americans, I can never forget the hurricane in my life."
Hope that helps.
Michelle
Hope that helps.
Michelle
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