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Thank for your helpThe pie chart shows the information about how many house was owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Overall, home owner and social renting were the most popular type of housing while private renting and social rent showed an opposite trend. However the number of houses was still rose significantly from 22 million in 1991 to 27 million in 2007.As can be seen from the pie chart, the number of houses was still rose significantly from 22 million in 1991 to 27 million in 2007. However, people tended to own a house all the time and there was an domination of home owner from 60% in 1991 to 70% in 2007. Social renting was also popular but not much as home owner, the figure started to decrease slightly , with roughly 19% in 1991 to 13% in 2007.In contrast, people were not attracted to private renting, the proportion of this figure had remained unchanged, accounted for 11% in 1991 and 2007. Social housing still remained the least popular type of housing from 10% to 6% between 1991 and 2007.

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here is the pie chart. I'm so sorry, thank you

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The pie chart shows ~~the~~ information about how many house was (wrong words, wrong form) owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Overall, home owner and social renting were the most popular type of housing while private renting and social rent (Social rent is not the opposite of social renting.) showed an opposite trend. (wrong usage) ~~However~~ (wrong usage) the number of houses was still rose significantly from 22 million in 1991 to 27 million in 2007.

~~As can be seen from the pie chart~~, (The reader knows you are talking about the pie charts. You don't have to tell them where the information comes from.) the number of houses was still rose significantly from 22 million in 1991 to 27 million in 2007. (You already said this. Don't repeat yourself.) However, people tended to own a house all the time (The pie chart does not tell you about what happened in 1999, 2001 and the other years.) and there was an domination (???) of home owner (wrong word) from 60% in 1991 to 70% in 2007. Social renting was also popular but not much as home owner, the figure started (wrong words) to decrease slightly , with roughly 19% in 1991 to 13% in 2007.

In contrast, people were not attracted to (That is your opinion. Just describe the data.) private renting, the proportion of this figure (wrong expression) ~~had~~ remained (the simple past is better.) unchanged, accounted for 11% in 1991 and 2007. Social housing still remained the least popular type of housing from 10% to 6% between 1991 and 2007.

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The two pie charts, representing data from 1991 and 2007, show a breakdown of total accommodation in the UK into four segments; ownership (private homes and social housing) and rentals (private and social). The charts also give the total number of units, 22 million in 1991 and 27 million in 2007.

Of the four categories, the largest segment in both years was home ownership, which increased over the 16-year period by 10%, starting at 60% in 1991 and culminating in 70% in 2007. In numerical terms, that is an increase from 13 million units to nearly 19 million units.

Private renting showed little change in terms of its proportion of the housing sector between 1991 and 2007. In numerical terms, it grew at about the same rate as the overall sector.

Subsidized (social) accommodation, both housing and rentals, decreased substantially. In 1991, these categories accounted for about 30% of the total (10% housing and 20% for rentals). But in 2007 the combined proportion was 18% (6% and 12%,). That is a percentage decrease of 40%. However, the decrease is even more marked in numerical terms. In 1991 there were about 6.6 million units of subsidized housing (30% of 22 million), compared with about 4 million in 2007 (18% of 27 million).

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