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The chart below shows sum of money from Southland’s main exports t in 2000 and 2017, and the future projections for 2025.
As can be from the chart, it clearly that a greatest sum of money from Southland’s main exports in international tourism, followed by dairy products and meat products respectively.
Sum of money’s exportation from international tourism and dairy products marked the highest figure on the chart at 10 billions. In contrast, sum of money’s exportation from meat products will bottom at 5 in future projecton for 2025. Sum of money’s exportation from international tourism slightly increased from 8 to billions to 9 billions in 2000 and 2017. In 2025, it will peak at 10 billions. In contrast, sum of money’s exportation from meat products steadily decreases from 6 billions to 5,5 billions in 2000 and 2017. In 2025,it will hit a low at 5. From 2000 to 2017, sum of money’s exportation from dairy products steedly increased from 7 billions to 10 billions, then will slowly decrease at 9,6 billions in future projection for 2025.
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- Like $500) of money from Southland’s main exports t in 2000 and 2017, and the future projections for 2025.
- As can be (missing word) from the chart, it clearly (missing word) that a greatest sum of money from Southland’s main exports (missing word) in international tourism, followed by dairy products and meat products respectively.
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- The possessive "money's" does not work here.
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The chart below shows sum (One sum? Like $500) of money from Southland’s main exports t in 2000 and 2017, and the future projections for 2025.
As can be (missing word) from the chart, it clearly (missing word) that a greatest su
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