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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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help me with this?? A petition?
0 HI I am not sure if this sounds bad but want peoples help! here is what i have: 02 br
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00 To Whom It May Concern: 02 br
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00 This message is being sent to you from a very concerned citizen of the State of 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 00 . 00 I am sending you this email today to bring something to your attention that needs to be addressed, not tomorrow or sometime in the future but today 00 . 02 br
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00 My concern 00 has 00 to do with UF&Shands. 02 br
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00 Dealing with Shands has 01 b 00 become 02 b 00 one of the worst and hardest things to do. Shands has been known in many communities as a “ 00 ”. UF&Shands claims they take takes care of the less fortunate but does not provide 01 b 00 enough 02 b 00 adequate care and then, in some cases, does nothing in order to prevent a death. 02 br
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00 Candi Scott, a 00 45 00 year old 00 citizen of 00 00 , 00 00 was swimming in the 00 and somehow got that horrible bacterial infection; 00 . 00 Once she started to have major problems she went to Shands to get medical treatment because she heard it was such a great hospital (or so she thought), instead she was treated horribly by the medical staff. As a result of Shands inability to treat her, Mrs. Scott later died at another hospital. We have found out that her death could have been prevented if Shands would have used proper medical procedures, didn’t call her a faker and 00 had 00 00 taken her back to see a doctor right away. 02 br
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00 Mrs. Scott’s case isn’t the only one; its one of many. Hundreds of people have claimed that their loved one died as a result of 00 S 00 hands negligence. Did you know that a 01 b 00 Central Florida couple has filed a $5 million lawsuit against 00 00 at the 00 , alleging their daughter was one of 10 premature babies given HIV-infected blood in 1983? 02 b 02 br
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00 Shannon McCants a registered pharmacist was shot to death while working at Shands because she didn’t provide adequate services which in reality was unfortunate but what does Shands do to help with security of its employees and patients? Absolutely nothing, as a matter of fact now people have been forced to wait outside of the pharmacy which in reality will cause a lot of more problems 02 br
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00 Patients have also complained that when calling into “The Refill Line” they go to pick them up @ shands but there not available. 00 00 Shands doesn’t notify the patients but the call in systems requests you provide them with a phone number. “I 00 came out of the pharmacy literally in tears one day. I had been there for over two hours, standing, waiting in line, only to get up to the window to be told, "Sorry, we're out of your prescription." This was the third month in a row. I had to take three busses to get there and having to make two to three trips a month to get one prescription was just asking too much.” 00 00 Said one angry Shands patient. As a result of this incident she was told she had to make an appointment to see any supervisor. 02 br
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00 I think its time that government officials look into the things that go on at 00 S 00 hands from the long wait times, especially in the emergency department for critically 00 ill 00 00 people that need immediate assistance, to the long wait times in the actual doctor’s office and you will see for yourself that something needs to be done. 02 br
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00 If you have any further questions please feel free to contact me directly; 02 br
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00 Can someone assist me?? 0-
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00 To Whom It May Concern: 02 br
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00 This message is being sent to you from a very concerned citizen of the State of 01 b 00 , 02 b 00 00 . 00 I am sending you this email today to bring something to your attention that needs to be addressed, not tomorrow or sometime in the future but today 00 . 02 br
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00 My concern 00 has 00 to do with UF&Shands. 02 br
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00 Dealing with Shands has 01 b 00 become 02 b 00 one of the worst and hardest things to do. Shands has been known in many communities as a “ 00 ”. UF&Shands claims they take takes care of the less fortunate but does not provide 01 b 00 enough 02 b 00 adequate care and then, in some cases, does nothing in order to prevent a death. 02 br
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00 Candi Scott, a 00 45 00 year old 00 citizen of 00 00 , 00 00 was swimming in the 00 and somehow got that horrible bacterial infection; 00 . 00 Once she started to have major problems she went to Shands to get medical treatment because she heard it was such a great hospital (or so she thought), instead she was treated horribly by the medical staff. As a result of Shands inability to treat her, Mrs. Scott later died at another hospital. We have found out that her death could have been prevented if Shands would have used proper medical procedures, didn’t call her a faker and 00 had 00 00 taken her back to see a doctor right away. 02 br
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00 Mrs. Scott’s case isn’t the only one; its one of many. Hundreds of people have claimed that their loved one died as a result of 00 S 00 hands negligence. Did you know that a 01 b 00 Central Florida couple has filed a $5 million lawsuit against 00 00 at the 00 , alleging their daughter was one of 10 premature babies given HIV-infected blood in 1983? 02 b 02 br
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00 Shannon McCants a registered pharmacist was shot to death while working at Shands because she didn’t provide adequate services which in reality was unfortunate but what does Shands do to help with security of its employees and patients? Absolutely nothing, as a matter of fact now people have been forced to wait outside of the pharmacy which in reality will cause a lot of more problems 02 br
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00 Patients have also complained that when calling into “The Refill Line” they go to pick them up @ shands but there not available. 00 00 Shands doesn’t notify the patients but the call in systems requests you provide them with a phone number. “I 00 came out of the pharmacy literally in tears one day. I had been there for over two hours, standing, waiting in line, only to get up to the window to be told, "Sorry, we're out of your prescription." This was the third month in a row. I had to take three busses to get there and having to make two to three trips a month to get one prescription was just asking too much.” 00 00 Said one angry Shands patient. As a result of this incident she was told she had to make an appointment to see any supervisor. 02 br
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00 I think its time that government officials look into the things that go on at 00 S 00 hands from the long wait times, especially in the emergency department for critically 00 ill 00 00 people that need immediate assistance, to the long wait times in the actual doctor’s office and you will see for yourself that something needs to be done. 02 br
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00 If you have any further questions please feel free to contact me directly; 02 br
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00 Can someone assist me?? 0-
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0 YOu need to be more specific about the incidents, and provide detailed statistics to back up your claims. 0-
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0 I am disgusted and appalled by the fact that you would use this young woman's death as a forum for a petition for the hospital to be improved. I did not know her personally, but in your statement, you have shifted the blame from a murderer to Mrs. McCants. Even if Ms. McCants did provide less than adequate service to her would-be killer (which by all media accounts I have read, she asked the
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I am a friend of the family and no one desires to be murdered. Shannon was doing her job and trying to handle a woman w/mental issues. If you have worked with the public, you know that you have to handle this with care. The woman was told that she could not skip in the line and asked to go to the back of the line and she would be serviced. For far to long, pharmacist get a bad name, but the r
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