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Amadeo Wayco Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
help me with this.
thank you sir for giving me an opportunity to introduce myself.Well, i am amadeo wayco 20 years of age. born and raise at Escalante City a 98kilometers away From here.
I was raise by a Discipline is atmost family and we are 8 in my family. i have 3older brothers and 2younger sisters. my father is a govN't employee and my mother is a housewife. I completed the academic requirement of a 4year course leading to the degree of bachelor of science in marine engineering.
my weakness is that i cannot tolerate any leniency in work. my short term goal is i want such a platform where i grow my career along with the organisation growth like yours. my long term goal is i want to be one of the reason for the success of the organization. thank you soo much sir for the opportunity and it is my pleasure that i indrotuced myslef to you
I was raise by a Discipline is atmost family and we are 8 in my family. i have 3older brothers and 2younger sisters. my father is a govN't employee and my mother is a housewife. I completed the academic requirement of a 4year course leading to the degree of bachelor of science in marine engineering.
my weakness is that i cannot tolerate any leniency in work. my short term goal is i want such a platform where i grow my career along with the organisation growth like yours. my long term goal is i want to be one of the reason for the success of the organization. thank you soo much sir for the opportunity and it is my pleasure that i indrotuced myslef to you
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You need to separate your text into sentences and paragraphs. Doing so makes it much easier to read. You also need to use capital letters properly, which you have not done so far.
- You need to separate your text into sentences and paragraphs.
- Doing so makes it much easier to read.
- You also need to use capital letters properly, which you have not done so far.
- They are needed for the first letter of the first word in a sentence or paragraph; the first letters of names, as well as when writing the letter i/I to refer to yourself.
- Try rewriting your text to include this advice, then you can post it here again.
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You need to separate your text into sentences and paragraphs. Doing so makes it much easier to read.
You also need to use capital letters properly, which you have not done so far. They are needed for the first letter of the first word in a sentence or paragraph; the first letters of names, as well as when writing the letter i/I to refer to yourself.
Try rewriting your text to in
You also need to use capital letters properly, which you have not done so far. They are needed for the first letter of the first word in a sentence or paragraph; the first letters of names, as well as when writing the letter i/I to refer to yourself.
Try rewriting your text to in
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