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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
help me with the statement of purpose.. urgent
Dear all
I wish to apply for Fulbright scholarship .. So help me with the statment of purpose..Tell me if there are any grammatical or syntactic errors or inapprpriate sentences..i will welcome any suggestions and modifications.
Thank you in advance..
The question: "Please write a clear and detailed description of your academic objectives and the reasons why you wish to pursue them. Discuss your goals both in terms of your field of study in general and within your specific area of specialization. Describe the type of program you wish to pursue and how it relates to your academic and professional background and your objectives for the future. Please keep in mind that the essay will be an essential part of your application for placement into an appropriate program. In your essay do not name specific universities at which you would like to study."
My SOP:
Since childhood, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new. This became a habit of life for me and affected my point of view a lot towards learning as not being just a routine. This habit encouraged me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities. In this regard, getting the master degree is nothing more than one step on my future plan of self-development.
When I was at secondary school, it was the first time I had learned computer. So, I was very interested in learning so much about computers. My fondness of this science motivated me to join the department of computer and electrical engineering at University of Gaza to fulfill my desire. But during my study, some subjects like internet technology and computer networks attracted my interest. My graduation project was simulations of some cases of computer networks using OPNET. Furthermore, after the completion of my study at the university, I enrolled in and gained CCNA. This step kindled my interest to pursue my education and acquire a deeper theoretical and practical knowledge in a major of computer networks.
"Computer Networks" field is not a random choice. It is a result of profound and long thinking about which field would be the most convenient to my interests, my background, and local society needs. As a developing country, is in an urgent need for all specialists in almost all majors to lead the building process. Therefore, getting a master in this field will give me the opportunity to lead several scientific researches that will hopefully contribute to this area of technology.
On the other hand, getting a master from another country will boost my cultural experience. As a representative of , I gained a great experience through my participation in "Reach Out" project which was a regional cultural project organized by British council. It granted me the opportunity to interact with people from different cultures and made me thirsty to know about other cultures.
Finally, I have a strong faith that getting master in this major will be a great benefit for me as it will definitely help in raising my academic background and enhancing my characteristic. It will also be advantageous for the local technological society as it will form an addition to the modern sciences that started to find its way here.
I wish to apply for Fulbright scholarship .. So help me with the statment of purpose..Tell me if there are any grammatical or syntactic errors or inapprpriate sentences..i will welcome any suggestions and modifications.
Thank you in advance..
The question: "Please write a clear and detailed description of your academic objectives and the reasons why you wish to pursue them. Discuss your goals both in terms of your field of study in general and within your specific area of specialization. Describe the type of program you wish to pursue and how it relates to your academic and professional background and your objectives for the future. Please keep in mind that the essay will be an essential part of your application for placement into an appropriate program. In your essay do not name specific universities at which you would like to study."
My SOP:
Since childhood, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new. This became a habit of life for me and affected my point of view a lot towards learning as not being just a routine. This habit encouraged me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities. In this regard, getting the master degree is nothing more than one step on my future plan of self-development.
When I was at secondary school, it was the first time I had learned computer. So, I was very interested in learning so much about computers. My fondness of this science motivated me to join the department of computer and electrical engineering at University of Gaza to fulfill my desire. But during my study, some subjects like internet technology and computer networks attracted my interest. My graduation project was simulations of some cases of computer networks using OPNET. Furthermore, after the completion of my study at the university, I enrolled in and gained CCNA. This step kindled my interest to pursue my education and acquire a deeper theoretical and practical knowledge in a major of computer networks.
"Computer Networks" field is not a random choice. It is a result of profound and long thinking about which field would be the most convenient to my interests, my background, and local society needs. As a developing country, is in an urgent need for all specialists in almost all majors to lead the building process. Therefore, getting a master in this field will give me the opportunity to lead several scientific researches that will hopefully contribute to this area of technology.
On the other hand, getting a master from another country will boost my cultural experience. As a representative of , I gained a great experience through my participation in "Reach Out" project which was a regional cultural project organized by British council. It granted me the opportunity to interact with people from different cultures and made me thirsty to know about other cultures.
Finally, I have a strong faith that getting master in this major will be a great benefit for me as it will definitely help in raising my academic background and enhancing my characteristic. It will also be advantageous for the local technological society as it will form an addition to the modern sciences that started to find its way here.
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Anonymous Since childhood, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new. This became a habit of life for me and affected my point of view a lot towards learning as not being just a routine. This habit encouraged me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities.
- Anonymous Since childhood, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new.
- This became a habit of life for me and affected my point of view a lot towards learning as not being just a routine.
- This habit encouraged me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities.
- In this regard, getting the master degree is nothing more than one step on my future plan of self-development.
- I don't like the way this is phrased in some parts.
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AnonymousSince childhood, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new. This became a habit of life for me and affected my point of view a lot towards learning as not being just a routine. This habit encouraged me to continually upgrade my academic capabilities. In this regard, getting the master degree is nothing more than one step on my future plan of sel
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