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Codeur Posted 8 years ago
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My grandmother and I have a honeyed relationship because I live with her since I was a newborn baby. My grandma has an attractive face. She has long, curly and grey hair. She has bright blue eyes. She is very healthy even though she is in her late eighties. She must have been a beautiful girl when she was young. My grandma is tall and thin. Her complexion was pale and spotty and wrinkles started appearing on her face. My grandmother is very kind and forgiving. Once, I broke her favorite flower pot, and instead of getting angry with me, she forgave me. My grandmother is a persistent collector. She collects a lot of things such as the stamp, old photo,... Cooking is her favorite hobby. She knows how to cook a lot of different dishes that surprises me and the whole family. Besides that, she is a good teller. I grew up in my grandmother's fairy tales, the stories that grew up with me, nourished my soul and also filled me with my grandma's love. Grandma is a person whom I am loving and respected, who always has a warm affection that makes me happy when I am with her.

  

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codeur honeyed relationship What does that mean?

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codeurhoneyed relationship

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codeurShe collects a lot of things such as the stamp, old photo,...

You should end that with a full stop. You should also write stamps and old photos because, you have not mentioned one in particular of each.

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