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My name is *(name)* and I have studied five terms at the BSc programme in *(name on education)* at the *(name on college)* School. I want to get experience and in *(a sector)* and therefore this internship would be perfect for me to get experience in that area.

What I find most thrilling about to work with *(a sector)* is that one gets to work with a variety projects which makes it possible to further develop and face new challenges. In high school, I studied the Natural Science Program because I wanted to keep options open. During this time my interest for mathematics grew and eventually a curiosity for *(subject at university)*, which made *(name on college* the obvious choice for further studies.

Besides my studies I have been working extra at several companies with various tasks. This winter I did an internship at *(name on company)* in *(name on city)*. I did my internship at their *(name on a department* department, which means that I worked with clients in the *(a sector)*. This time gave me more knowledge about the *(name on sector)* industry and it has also made more comfortable to work in Excel.

Except that I help the family company *(name on company)* with the bookkeeping and works part-time at *(name on company)*. I have worked in several departments during a short time at *(name on company)* and it has been required for me to be flexible and to have the ability to co-operate with new collages all the time. The *(name on sport)* has been a big part of my life before I started to study at university level, and I have played at the highest possible junior level in Sweden and this experience has made me realise how important it is with good cooperation. The collaboration skills I got from the *(namn på sport)* have come to good use at *(name on company)* and other earlier workplaces. Some other things that the *(namn på sport)* has made me realise is that it's necessary with discipline and hard working to get the best possible result in the work which has to be done.

*(month and date)* I had the chance to participate in the “*(name on project)*” that *(name on organization)* hosted. I got a better view of how everything worked and what the different departments did at *(name on a type of working place)* during this trip. My interest for the industry has grown further after the experience.

It would be a great honour to work at a company which has a good reputation as *(name on company)* has. The company culture seems to be really developing and stimulating and the employees seem to get a big responsibility early in the career. I think that *(name on company)* also offer a creative and international environment where the sky is the limit for the employee, so I hope I got the chance to be a part and develop in your organisation.

Sincerly,