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James do Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Help me with parallel structure
Can you tell me which sentence is correct:
1. The more the number of LEDs used, the more differences in the paths of signal coming to the receiver, the more noise being emerged.
2. The more the number of LEDs used, the more differences in the paths of signal to the receiver, the more presences.
I want to express the idea that when using more LEDs, we get more noise. Can you which sentence is correct or not? Or both is incorrect. Please note that I'm concerning formal writing.
Thanks!
1. The more the number of LEDs used, the more differences in the paths of signal coming to the receiver, the more noise being emerged.
2. The more the number of LEDs used, the more differences in the paths of signal to the receiver, the more presences.
I want to express the idea that when using more LEDs, we get more noise. Can you which sentence is correct or not? Or both is incorrect. Please note that I'm concerning formal writing.
Thanks!
Top answer
The short answer is neither are exactly correct. ) I would suggest a modification of #1: " 1. " You could also say "the greater the number of LEDs used".
- The short answer is neither are exactly correct.
- ) I would suggest a modification of #1: " 1.
- " You could also say "the greater the number of LEDs used".
- "More" is not usually used this way.
- It is somewhat of an imprecise term.
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The short answer is neither are exactly correct. (Please note I don't know much about what you are talking about.) I would suggest a modification of #1:
"1. The morethe number of LEDs used, the more signals coming to the receiver, and the more noise transmitted."
You could also say "the greater the number of LEDs used". "More" is not usually used
"1. The more
You could also say "the greater the number of LEDs used". "More" is not usually used
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AnonymousThe short answer is neither are exactly correct. (Please note I don't know much about what you are talking about.) I would suggest a modification of #1:"1. The more the number of LEDs used, the more signals coming to the receiver, and the more noise transmitted."You could also say "the greater the number of LEDs used". "More" is not usually used this way. It is s
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Actually I have to emphasize the differences among the paths of signals coming to to the receiver because noise is caused by this kind of differences. "the more signals coming to the receiver" does not seem to convey that idea. Also, I don't know which word should come with the word "noise". Should it be appear, emerge, arise, or to be present?
Can I say
The more LEDs used, the m
Can I say
The more LEDs used, the m
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