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Masdelomismo Posted 10 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics

Help me with my song lyrics

Hi everyone. I'm from Spain, I wrote a song, and I would appreciate if someone could help me fix my errors (if there is any, or at least, a big one). Here is the song:

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We can't wait, We're getting there.
They should be arriving up on time.
We're getting closer.

Had enough,
bad times: gone!.
We hope to be allowed to make some noise.
We're gonna spend all night long.

Just leave your mind lose tonight,
And dance with a brighter light.
Missing something in your eyes.
And leave those streams light the road to your land.

No, we will never come back.
Oh, Let me stay or let me die.
Fill the glass and let me jump.
You breath this life untill it's done.

Let me breathe just for a while.
Break the map, we know it's just a lie.
I hope you don't matter.
hope you don't matter .

Second try, prepare yourself.
Modify, We're being someone else.
Lights up!, We're going again.
  
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