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People often argued that the world is being more complicated because of the evolution of the Internet. However, I utterly agree that the Internet makes people come closer by making the communication easier.

First of all, the social medias like Facebook, Twitter on the Internet helps shorten the distances by bringing people and communities together. Information is sent quickly and doesn’t take much time as in the pass. It helps us to know more about different cultures and what is happening in the world. For instance, when a community from a poor country or a place has just been destroyed by a storm, social medias can globalize this information and trend it to many nations in the world in order to receive donation which supply the victims the valued items and give them a hand to get through this suffer. So social medias can be seen to play an important role in connecting people together.

Second, video via the Internet is another advantage for communication. It reaches contact instantly and more convenient to contact with one another. It conveys the information to people in an effective way than texting to one another. Video conferencing can help bring people staying far away from each other in a sharing place. For example, it helps two or more companies meet each other to talk about business without meeting face to face. Thank to this, the partners can save time and money when transporting between place to place to solve business work. Thus, the advantages of video via Internet makes us communicate to one another easier regardless the geographical distance.

To summarize, the advantages of convenience and time saving make Internet become an easier way to communicate. I strongly believe that Internet is an important tool to get the world closer.