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Dear Sir/Madame:
I am writing to you because I believe my experiences, qualifications had proven my ability as Professional to which will allow me to significantly contribute to your company.
Aside from finishing Bachelor of Science in Elementary Education at .......... I also took and finish 27 units of Master in Business Management with 18 units of Undergraduate Management Course at ..............
In reviewing the attached resume, you will note that I have acquired valuable experiences in fields of administrative because I have been Administrative Assistant for more than 13 years in Dept., of........, and it’s a job I greatly enjoy.
I have been possess a unique talent for delivering such edge into the principles and values of your institution. Furthermore I am multi-task oriented, enjoy a challenge, and continually stay abreast of the latest advancement in technology in delivering services to the clients.
If you are seeking a Professional who has excellent people in problem solving skills and can easily provide optimum support to your institution, then please consider what I have to offer.
In addition to my extensive experience, I have strong communication and customer service. My background makes me an excellent candidate for any vacant position in your company.
My enclosed resume provides additional details about my background. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss this letter.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Top answer
Where I live, in Canada, it is customary to begin by telling the reader what job you are applying for, or at least the field in which you want to work. I don't see this clearly stated anywhere in your letter. Initially, I thought you wanted to be a teacher, but later I saw this was not the case.
- Where I live, in Canada, it is customary to begin by telling the reader what job you are applying for, or at least the field in which you want to work.
- I don't see this clearly stated anywhere in your letter.
- Initially, I thought you wanted to be a teacher, but later I saw this was not the case.
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Where I live, in Canada, it is customary to begin by telling the reader what job you are applying for, or at least the field in which you want to work. I don't see this clearly stated anywhere in your letter. Initially, I thought you wanted to be a teacher, but later I saw this was not the case.
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