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Piplot Posted 13 years ago
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Help me with mi grammar please.
Hello! Please help me with the next paragraph and correct my mistakes. Thanks in advance.
Hi Elisa,
I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic. First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm. Then I took a coach tour, after 1 hour, I get to "Caral". I saw lots of achaeological places, views and plants. After a while, I started to get too hot so I put on my sunhat!. After that I went to visit "The fortress of Paramonga" and Its beautiful beaches. Finaly, I took the coach back home.
Speak to you soon. love Yuri.
Thanks again.
Hi Elisa,
I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic. First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm. Then I took a coach tour, after 1 hour, I get to "Caral". I saw lots of achaeological places, views and plants. After a while, I started to get too hot so I put on my sunhat!. After that I went to visit "The fortress of Paramonga" and Its beautiful beaches. Finaly, I took the coach back home.
Speak to you soon. love Yuri.
Thanks again.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised text: Hi Elisa, I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please fix them and post your revised text: Hi Elisa, I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru.
- It was fantastic.
- First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm.
- Then I took a coach t our, afte r 1 hour, I get to "C ara l" .
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised text:
Hi Elisa,
I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic. First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm. Then I took a coach tour, after 1 hour, I get to "Caral". I saw lots of achaeological places, views and plants. After a while
Hi Elisa,
I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic. First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm. Then I took a coach tour, after 1 hour, I get to "Caral". I saw lots of achaeological places, views and plants. After a while
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Hi Elisa,
I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic. First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm. Then I took a coach tour. After an hour, I arrived in Caral. I saw lots of achaeological places, views and plants. After a while, I started to get too hot so I put on my sunhat. After that I went to visit The fortress of
I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic. First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm. Then I took a coach tour. After an hour, I arrived in Caral. I saw lots of achaeological places, views and plants. After a while, I started to get too hot so I put on my sunhat. After that I went to visit The fortress of
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Hi Elisa,
I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic. First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm. Then I took a coach tour. After an hour, I arrived in Caral. I saw lots of archaeological places, scenery and plants. After a while, I started to get too hot so I put on my sunhat. After that I went to visit The fortress of Paramonga a
I've got back from my trip to the north of Peru. It was fantastic. First of all, I arrived in Barranca yesterday at 3 pm. Then I took a coach tour. After an hour, I arrived in Caral. I saw lots of archaeological places, scenery and plants. After a while, I started to get too hot so I put on my sunhat. After that I went to visit The fortress of Paramonga a
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