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Gray green 190 Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Help me with grammar

Well, currently I am studying at the university, I get up at 8 in the morning, I go for a run in the park and I jog back, then I go to shower listening to music and singing, more or less I am having breakfast at 10 in the morning, then I start studying until lunchtime, I'm having lunch and watching TV at the same time, I take a break for an hour and continue studying until 8, then I have dinner and go to bed.

  

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You wrote one very very very long sentence of nearly 90 words. That is not good writing. You have abused those poor wimpy little commas so much that I am weeping for them.

  • You wrote one very very very long sentence of nearly 90 words.
  • That is not good writing.
  • You have abused those poor wimpy little commas so much that I am weeping for them.
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You wrote one very very very long sentence of nearly 90 words. That is not good writing. You have abused those poor wimpy little commas so much that I am weeping for them.

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