help me: urgent in letter

dear friends:

I already posted a query asking for a good sponsorship letter.but was replied to send a sample letter.

so i have pasted a sample sponsorship letter in this post.

The subject is the same but include some thing like "my sponsor is ready to employ me in his country after my studies",etc

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Letter starting

I, Sponsor name and address wish to declare that I am prepared to sponsor my son-in-law, kailash, for Rs --------, which is the total of the tuition fee and living costs for the duration of the course, and is equivalent to £ --------.

My son-in-law has gained admission to the University Of xxxxxx to study for an M.Sc (Eng) xxxxxxxxxx. The duration of this course is 12 months and the tuition fees are £--------. The estimated living cost, as advised by the university, for the duration of the course is between £ ----- and £-------.

For your information I have attached full financial details of myself and my family for you to ascertain our financial status and capability to sponsor my son-in-law for his education in the UK.

I wish to confirm that my son-in-law’s only intention of going to the UK is to study at this Institution and that he will leave the UK on completion of his course.

If you require any further information please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours faithfully