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00I have a comparable essay and I need help in correcting grammer's mistakes if you are not busy.. 02br
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01b00 02b00 Ancient Greece was one of the remarkable civilization in the ancient times. It represented an era in which people had great ideas about philosophy and literature. Moreover, there were many play writers who were famous for the dramas. Sophecles was one of them, he was well known for his Drama 01i00Antigone02i00. For many reasons I noticed that my father is comparable to the character of Creon. Like the king of Thebes, my father wants every one in the family to obey him in what ever he says; He is hard to convince in many cases and he does not like anyone to disagree with the decision that he makes. 02br
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00 Creon the king of Thebes, has a strong character that makes all the citizens obey him and his rules. For example, he ordered not to bury Polyneices when he died, because he ravaged the country and he did not fight in their behalf. In the same way, my father wants every member in our family to obey him. For example, when my brothers do not study for their exams he becomes angry and shouts at them to study instead of play. Both, my father and Creon like to control everything around them and to be respected. 02br
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00 As we know, the king did not like any one to disagree with his decisions. When his son Haemon was with Antigone side and he saw that his father was not justice, creon became angry and he said that he did not want any body to tell him how to rule. Also Haemon asked his father not to be too rigid and to be flexible. Similarly, my father does not like any one of us to disagree with what he say. When my father took us on a tour in a specific place and we did not like it, he felt angry. In addition we agreed with him because he knew which would be the better place for us. Creon and my father, both of them do not change the way of taking decision and they do not care about other opinions. 02br
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00 Creon also was hard to convince and he was so stubborn that he hardly change his mind. When his son Haemon asked him to be flexible, he yelled and did not listen to him. At last he have been convinced when the blind prophet told Creon that he did two mistakes, first mistake was he did not bury Polyneices and the second mistake was when he put Antigone inside the rocky vault. Also the gods were so mad about what he did. Both my father and Creon had the same attribute. My father was really hard to convince, especially when I wanted to go out. For example, when I asked him to give me the permission to go to my friend's houses, he did not allow me to go. I asked my mother to convince him, and then he gave me the permission. Like Creon, my father did not easily change his opinion; they both needed time for being convinced. 02br
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00 In conclusion, I described some aspects of the similarity between the personality of Greon and my father. They both had a strong personality that they did not let anyone to control them. Also, they had a unique character that made them able to lead all the things around them. In addition Creon was the king of Thebes and my father was the king in the home. 0-