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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance

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Dear Joy,
Following employees completed their 10th anniversary with XXX this month. Kindly distribute the attached letter to them accordingly their anniversary date and extend our congratulation to them. Thanks
  

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I think the letter should read as follows; Dear Joy, The following employees have completed their 10th anniversary with *** this month of April, 2014. Please kindly distribute the attached letter to the listed employees in the order of their anniversary dates and extend our hearty congratulations to them. Regards

— Anonymous

  • I think the letter should read as follows; Dear Joy, The following employees have completed their 10th anniversary with *** this month of April, 2014.
  • Please kindly distribute the attached letter to the listed employees in the order of their anniversary dates and extend our hearty congratulations to them.
  • Regards
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I think the letter should read as follows;

Dear Joy,

The following employees have completed their 10th anniversary with *** this month of April, 2014. Please kindly distribute the attached letter to the listed employees in the order of their anniversary dates and extend our hearty congratulations to them.

Regards
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