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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance
Help me to write a congratulation letter
Dear XXX,
25th March 2014 will mark your 15th anniversary as a member of the XXX family. Congratulations! We would like to take this opportunity to thank you for the past 15 years of hard work and dedication to XXX.
As a valued member of our organization, we recognize your contributions to the success of our company. We hope that you will continue this journey with us for many years to come.
Our congratulations to you once again.
We will be in touch with you to celebrate this journey.
25th March 2014 will mark your 15th anniversary as a member of the XXX family. Congratulations! We would like to take this opportunity to thank you for the past 15 years of hard work and dedication to XXX.
As a valued member of our organization, we recognize your contributions to the success of our company. We hope that you will continue this journey with us for many years to come.
Our congratulations to you once again.
We will be in touch with you to celebrate this journey.
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We will be in touch with you to celebrate this journey. These last two sentences seem to add nothing to the otherwise good letter. If you feel you have to pad it out a little you could include a little biographical detail such as "When you started with us as a humble clerk we only had 15 employees.
- We will be in touch with you to celebrate this journey.
- These last two sentences seem to add nothing to the otherwise good letter.
- If you feel you have to pad it out a little you could include a little biographical detail such as "When you started with us as a humble clerk we only had 15 employees.
- Today we employ over 100 people and are continuing to grow.
- Your input in this success has been recognized with your promotion to vice president of marketing.
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AnonymousOur congratulations to you once again.We will be in touch with you to celebrate this journey.These last two sentences seem to add nothing to the otherwise good letter. If you feel you have to pad it out a little you could include a little biographical detail such as "When you started with us as a humble clerk we only had 15 employees. Today we empl
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